Today we looked at using all our writing skills to write an exciting story. The children did amazingly well! We looked at the start of a video from the Literacy Shed website. You can see the video at this link:
https://www.literacyshed.com/uploads/1/2/5/7/12572836/marshmallows_993_153.mp4
We only wrote for 40 minutes, but the children wrote some amazing stories in that time. We also watched a video posted by author Tom Palmer which helped us with our editing. We learnt to write fast, then we add things, take things away and then replace.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CUScPnDwzPU
The video was very useful although we did notice that Tom's handwriting was a bit scruffy!
The children loved sharing their ideas about what would happen to the monster and, more importantly - the marshmallows!
Well done Class 2!
